Heart-Soul Sounds – A Quadrille


Have you ever heard the sad sound
As betrayal a soul wounds
As a shattered heart hits the ground

Have you ever heard the sigh of release
As a soul lets go of grief
As a heart rewound in love finds peace

Heart-soul sounds

©RedCat

Written for this week’s Quadrille prompt – What’s in a word? – over at dVerse. Where Lillian prompts us to use the homographic pair of the word wound, meaning using the word twice in our 44 words Quadrille.

Read other Quadrilles by me here.


8 thoughts on “Heart-Soul Sounds – A Quadrille

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  1. I LOVE this! And most especially the use of the word “rewound”. You’re the first person who has used a form of the word…and you’ve done it so well. For a heart to be able to rewind in love after a hurtful relationship or incident….what a blessing indeed.
    Thank you for posting!

  2. Aaah, this is lovely. The gentle repetition of ‘Have you ever’, and the heart finding love again. Mmmmm :)

  3. This is incredibly, incredibly heart-stirring! I love the idea; “a heart rewound in love finds peace.” Yes it most certainly does! 💝💝

  4. ‘As a heart rewound in love finds peace’ – brilliant! I love how you’ve split this into two, the wounded heart and then the healing heart. Great response!

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