“So if all do their duty, they need not fear harm”, proclaimed the Queens herald.
But they all knew the truth. They would come to harm whether they did their duty or not. The only difference lay in how quickly the harm would come. The Queen cared not for their life. She didn’t give a thought to her subjects coming to harm.
The only things she cared about was her wealth prospering, her power growing, her legacy and legend spreading, her monuments to rise and compete with the ancient marvels of the world. Hers would be the biggest temple, the highest tower, the grandest tomb.
Little did she suspect, hers would be the most spectacular assassination. Thought out and plotted by the greatest minds of the country. Impaled by the sacrificial bull. Crushed by falling marble. Interred in the fallen tower of follies.
© RedCat
Written for tonight’s Prosery: Doing our duty at dVerse. The prompt where we write prose inspired by a given line from a poem and not exceeding the word count of 144.
Tonight’s line is from William Blake’s poem ‘The Chimney Sweeper:’ In Songs of Innocence (1789)
So if all do their duty, they need not fear harm
Image credits:
First image: Palais idéal, Hauterives, France from Wikimedia Commons.
Second image: Photo by Hisham Zayadnh on Unsplash
Great bit of drama, Redcat. Well penned.
Oh, excellent, Helene! Perfectly told. I can imagine the Queen’s herald proclaiming, and the people rumbling.
“But they all knew the truth. They would come to harm whether they did their duty or not. The only difference lay in how quickly the harm would come.” I daresay what you write here is a universal truth. I do love how the rebels interrupted her trajectory. Triple slam dunk. :)
Wonderful, Helen! This made me think of the Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland. I like how the Queen met her downfall. Those with what they believe is absolute power always stand in a precarious position. Is the main photo of Angkor Wat?
Great images. I love that rousing ending!
So good, Helene! <3
-David
The marble image is powerful Well done.
So well done!
Greed never has a good ending. Nicely penned!
I so love the triple layered assassination of the queen here :D potent, and brilliant use of the line by Blake. Love it! 💝💝
To achieve greatness by being assassinated is great, makes me think of the murder of Julius Caesar, which is a large part of his legacy.
Love how you used Ingrid’s line …. and the Queen got her just desserts.