Written for today’s prompt at toads ~ Weekend Mini Challenge. We’re asked to read the poem ‘The Uncertainty of the Poet’. And “study the structure and word patterns, and then write a similar poem, choosing your own words to noodle around with, restricting yourself to those words and trying them out in different combinations in couplets.”
This was really fun and both as easy as it looks at first and deceptively hard. I played around with a couple of different word combination before finding my stride… ;-)
Walking up to you A private spotlight An audience of one Curious of me Demanding honesty Both good now and ugly past Not polished social media life The spotlight is not a mirror But a doorway to private rooms Excluding the rest of the world
Hands meet, fingers intertwining Skin contact ignites the spark Wanting a kiss, lips tingle Two souls connect, passion flares Hands explore curves and zones Stripping away layers Until skin touches only skin Kissing, licking, nibbling, sucking Pleasure given and shared
Every sensation heightened by mutual awareness Breath deepens, heartbeat races Waves start to build and roll Velocity and intensity increases Wave cresting, climax shared Orgasm takes hold You spend yourself as I buck and tremble
Wave upon wave of darkness crashing in Sinking, no chance to swim Chilling doubt seeps in Trauma wrought chains within
Shower and sparkle of bubbles with air Lead heavy, stuck in despair Losing the fight to draw air Would anyone even care?
Inky and ice cold tarn of sorrow No dawn of tomorrow Frozen in ice sheets of sorrow Cold in soul and marrow
Glimmer and gleam of bright hope Igniting life’s colourful kaleidoscope Even for the most wretched there’s shimmering hope Hold my hand and together we’ll anything cope
And before anyone gets worried, this is thankfully not how bad my depression is right now. This is processing by writing about it. It is also an attempt to help someone else express themselves. And a chance to show some hope for everyone having a hard time right now.
Come ice, come snow Come star foretold Plant seeds to grow Spin straws to gold Come birth, regrowth Come poets hope Let dreams be wrought Craft words to cope
Plant seeds to grow Spin straws to gold Seek waters flow Be brave, be bold Let dreams be wrought Craft words to cope Let peace be sought Learn faith to hold
Seek waters flow Be brave, be bold Come muses glow Come tales untold Let peace be sought Learn faith to hold Come heal, be whole Come wear bards robe
Come muses glow Come tales untold Come ice, come snow Come star foretold Come heal, be whole Come wear bards robe Come birth, regrowth Come poets hope
Seven stars in the fall sky Shining sisters with a cry Shall we forever fly, flee Stalked by hunters, never free Scribe us a new life story See us love, laugh, kiss, worry Shroud us in modern glory
Written for Poetics: Stars that count over at dVerse. This Pleiades form, seven lines with seven syllables each, and all starting with the same letter as the one word title, is wholly new to me and took a couple of tries.
Tried to find inspiration in mythology, only found a tiredness over the way women are used in almost all of our founding stories.